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Monday, surprise…

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After  being away for so long I am finally here.  
This visit has been so difficult to plan with the shuffling of schedules and appointments,
travel arrangements, and keeping it all a secret so they will be surprised.
There will be laughter  
and hugs, lots of hugs, and some tears;
we will talk all night and then…it will be time for me to leave once again.
I am 
so excited I can hardly keep from shouting,  “Hello, I am home”!
Oh no, they’re not here and the door’s locked!

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22 thoughts on “Monday, surprise…

    1. I surprised my parents one time but my brother was in on it–he picked me up at the airport. It was worth all the planning to see their faces when I walked in!

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