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Stuck together in the rain…


Figures there would be a downpour when I don’t have my umbrella and my car is on the other side of the parking lot.  Oh, there is Mr. Dreamy and he doesn’t have an umbrella either, and obviously not happy about it.  Looks like he is coming over here to wait in the doorway for the rain to stop.  We will be stuck here together for a while, I think.  What a pity.

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24 thoughts on “Stuck together in the rain…

  1. What a great job you did with this story. Impressive scene you built with five sentences. Have a great night Patricia! Eva

    1. Thanks, Eva. With these little stories I often wonder what happens next. Five sentences is good for me…a whole story would be a headache for me.

      1. I really think you’re underestimating yourself. You would be amazing; I think you should do NaNoWriMo with me in November. 🙂 It would be a blast…

        1. I tried it last year but didn’t make it through the month. Not sure why because I do the A to Z Challenge in April with no problem.

          1. Try again. 🙂 At least this year you’ll have a partner. I said the same last November, and I did it.

  2. What a great opening to a relationship where perhaps she finds out what Mr. Dreamy dreams about. He may be very interesting!

  3. This is my kind of story, Patricia, making me smile at the possibility that fate is intervening to give to give this unintended couple some time together. Who knows where this could lead? If nothing else, she will go home smiling, having enjoyed the moment. I believe in magical encounters! Thank you for a great Two Shoes Tuesday post!

    1. I believe there are magical encounters, too. Maybe Mr.Dreamy was looking for a way to meet his Ms Dreamy? Another story another time maybe.

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